Monday, April 13, 2009

Love is a curse...

You see that one person that makes you smile.
You feel something churning in your stomach.
You think about them everyday.
Want them in your life, no matter what
Now is it love, or an obsession?
Your eyes light up, your heart is on fire,
You feel the temperature rising
You kiss, you feel, touch and love
Then you realize
Love is a maze
And you have to find you'r way through
You may stumble down the wrong path
Might keep falling down and not want to get up
But that is what love is, finding you
And someone to support you
Love is what helps you find that person
Everything that happens is for a reason
Love is something good and bad
Love is something that needs patients
But also causes pain
Love just slowly drives you insane!
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19 comments:

  1. AlexyApril 13, 2009 at 12:10 PM

    awesome poem ernie!!!!!
    i love it.
    i agree with you in everything you put in your poem!
    good job :]

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  2. lUCkYApril 13, 2009 at 12:15 PM

    i like you peom alot. good job. :]

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  3. RedCanaryApril 13, 2009 at 12:15 PM

    I like your ending.

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  4. nancyApril 13, 2009 at 12:34 PM

    awwww
    its really sweet and nice like you :]
    nice job

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  5. JessicaApril 14, 2009 at 7:30 AM

    i likE yOUR POEM EARNiE!!!
    xD iTS VERy NiCE
    -->pEBBlESz<--

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  6. TONYApril 14, 2009 at 7:32 AM

    i liked your poem kid

    Tony ayala

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  7. luisApril 14, 2009 at 7:37 AM

    i like ur poem t was good from start to ending keep upthe good work

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  8. JAZMINEApril 14, 2009 at 7:42 AM

    nice poem it was really good
    *good job*

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  9. daliaApril 14, 2009 at 7:57 AM

    Wow its a really nice and true poem great job i loved it....=]
    *Dalia*

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  10. loveableApril 14, 2009 at 8:01 AM

    very very nice poem it sounds romantic

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  11. LocoApril 14, 2009 at 8:38 AM

    Very well sophisticated poem you explain ways that i understand completely

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  12. AnonymousApril 14, 2009 at 9:41 AM

    Rawsome poem
    One day you will be such a famous poet
    they will sell dolls of you with the string on the back, and when you pull the string the doll will say "Check me out"

    and when the string breaks
    the doll will be like

    "Check me out, check, check, check, check"
    (In a studdering motion)

    LOLZZZZZZZZZ

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  13. JaymeeApril 14, 2009 at 9:46 AM

    i like your poem...i feel the same way but i really hate love.

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  14. crystalApril 14, 2009 at 9:48 AM

    it was really good ernie. good job. :)

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  15. ZulyApril 14, 2009 at 9:58 AM

    wow i lke your poem.
    Good job

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  16. JackyApril 14, 2009 at 12:12 PM

    ii LiiK3 YuR PO3M V3RY MUCH
    ii S3RIOUSLY LOV3 iiT
    .. AND 4 THOS3 WHOO SAY TH3Y HAT3 LOV3.. SHOULD THiiNK ABOUT iiT AND SAY WHAT DO ii F33L TOWARDS THE PEOPLE WHO RAISED ME...
    ... Yu MiiGHT NOT LOV3 OTH3R P3OPL3 BUt, SERiiOUSLY THiiNK ABOUT iiT AND W3N Yu G3T 2 DAt POiiNT YU'll S33 U DONt R3ALLY HAT3 LOVE, Yu JUSt F33L AS iiF NOBODY LOV3S YU.. BUt DA TRUTH iiS DAt MANY P3OPL3 iiN DA WORLD LOV3 Yu

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  17. =)April 14, 2009 at 12:13 PM

    WOW!
    i like your poem!!!!!
    SMILEYBABEY♥

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  18. YanarilysApril 14, 2009 at 12:19 PM

    it was good! your poem is so true!

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  19. ALEXIA!!!April 14, 2009 at 12:23 PM

    I like you poem Ernie
    Its really good

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